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Reviews For More Than Words

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 11:13 PM · Chapter: More Than Words
This is very sweet. I adore Molly and Arthur. There were a few parts of the dialogue that felt a little formal and stiff, but for the most part this is beautifully done. Fabian and Gideon are great, and you can see the future Fred, George, and even a little Ron in them. Good story.


Name: andharrywokeup (Signed) · Date: 03/04/08 7:03 PM · Chapter: More Than Words
Juls! :D Yum! Really, that's all I can say! Yumm fluff to the maxx! There's something about these stories in that they all seem to have spectacular endings and this one you've written is no exception. I burst out laughing at my computer and could totally imagine Arthur raising his eyebrow like that! Terrific job! :D x x x


Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 02/04/08 10:47 PM · Chapter: More Than Words
That was lovely, juls! Really. I've grown quite fond of Arthur/Molly reading momotwins story, but this is so sweet. And Gubby is right this line here It was the odious Lucius Malfoy that had her all a tither, and she harrumphed before patting her hair down. is perfect! I can picture it in my head! Well done!


Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 1:47 AM · Chapter: More Than Words
Awww.. this is short but cute! :) I really like the way you portray their love!


Name: x-happygirl (Signed) · Date: 30/03/08 2:12 AM · Chapter: More Than Words
Awwwww that's so sweet Juls, I loved it! Funny, cute, sweet awwwwww!

Loved it juls!


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