Reviews For Photo of a Grim

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 1:38 PM · Chapter: Photo of a Grim

Well, I've always written Sybil off as a ditzy old broad, but with this little story, I'm not so sure.

She, at least, had the brains to realize that what was meant to be was not to be interfered with, even to the poiint of letting Albus die.  It was his plan and she trusted him to have his reasons and that it was the ONLY course of action.

But she's still got the guilt trip going. Let it go, old girl.  He knew what was coming, so he did what he had to. . .and so did Severus.

Author's Response: If I succeeded in making Sybill an interesting character to you, that's wonderful! =) Yes, she had to accept Albus' plan, but who could accept such a plan without having some second thoughts? I'm sure she'll be alright though eventually. ;) Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 13/06/08 10:43 AM · Chapter: Photo of a Grim
I really enjoyed it. I like that she saw Dumbledore's death, and she didn't know exactly what to do with it. I really liked how you described her visions too. You were really able to capture how they came out well. I like also how she really didn't want to see that last vision (oh, and that her Seer ability was actually working). Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked the story. Yes, sometimes she does See something that's actually true...

Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 14/05/08 3:51 PM · Chapter: Photo of a Grim

I don't think I've ever read a Trelawney story, and I definitely enjoyed this. I think you portray her well - confident in her ability but a bit paranoid of various things. However, in this case her vision showed her what others did not know until later. I really feel her emotions about wishing she'd been wrong.

Author's Response: Trelawney appears to be a character seldomly written, but I really enjoy writing her, and it's good to hear that you liked the story! =) Thanks a lot for you lovely review.

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