Name: Holly Ilex
(Signed) · Date:
17/08/08 2:15 PM · Chapter:
AH, the chess game of love has started.
I HATE CHESS.
At least you had them snogging in less than 1,000 words! instead of somewhere deep in chapter 12!
Name: Hekate101 (Anonymous) · Date: 08/08/08 5:21 PM · Chapter: The Game
*points and laughs* Oh poor confused Draco. Paranoia is such fun. And D/Hr, of course. That too. There are a few comma splices that throw off the flow, but it's nice. The quote you chose for the beginning fits well, and you show Draco's frustration excellently. Good work, overall.