What an enchanting little encounter, bananas and all!
Why couldn't it have worked out for them?
Why did Voldemort have to ruin so many lives?
Why am I asking stupid questions . . . JKR wanted it that way, so it's up to us fanfics writers to correct the injustices of her stories and BY GOD, this is as good a place to start as any!
Seriously, it was bloody brilliant!
I never thought I'd read a Snape/Lily and actually enjoy it, but you proved me wrong! What a cute little fic. It's really nothing but adorable, with just a hint of sadness - it all works together so perfectly. It's great, Elena!