Reviews For Choice

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 11:15 PM · Chapter: Choice
Oooh... the emotions that are brought up in such a small span are amazing.  It almost makes you sympathize with him.  I think I saw where Snape was the character in this story, but really, it could have been any Death Eater.  Nice Job!

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the read! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. ;) =)

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 2:11 PM · Chapter: Choice
What gooses can lead to, eh?

Oh, how I love a good dose of angst every now and then. I like the way you said this part: "Of course, he would live, seen biologically.... Still, he would never live after tonight." Very chilling. I also love how you ended similarly to how you began - it gives the whole piece an interesting effect. Very nice!


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the drabble! Thanks a lot for reading, and for your lovely review. =)

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 1:17 PM · Chapter: Choice

Okay, now this is REALLY a (sort of) hard one to read. Not that I'msurprised that a Death Eater would kill someone his was in love with, but that he'd actually do it and have remorse that he knows will haunt him all of his life.

CHOICE....couldn't he hae chosen to NOT kill her and the both of them taken off, far, far away?

Obviously not, as it would only put off their deaths.

Sad stor y. but well done!

Author's Response: They couldn't have chosen to run for it - because a happy ending would have weakened the entire story endlessly. It was meant to be sad, and a hard read. ;) Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! =)

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