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26/08/08 12:05 AM · Chapter:
I like your version of how Lily & James got together. You did a great job with the characterization of all of them. I loved the line : Remus slipped in and fanned the flame that would eventually turn into the raging fire consuming both James and Lily. That was beautiful imagery!
Author's Response: Thanks, Taryn. I'm glad you think I did these character's justice. It was a real challenge to me. I relate with Remus, but the other ones are quite elusive to me. Thanks for the lovely comment about the 'fanned the flame' line. I greatly appreciate you reading and reviewing my work. Can't wait to read some more of yours. Cheers!