Reviews For Sixteenth Summer

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 2:35 PM · Chapter: The Hand

I am SO glad you did the scene betwen Albus and Severus, about the vows abd Albus' death.  he did promise and he was 'between a roack and a hard place', but Albus, rightly, pointed out he was dying anyway.

Hum, I wonderwhat would have happened if Albus had died in his sleep, of 'natural' causes.  would that negate the 'Unbreakable ' vow?  Or get Draco off the hook with Baldie Voldie?

I smell a plot bunny!


Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 17/09/08 2:22 PM · Chapter: The Task

" Oh,what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive."

Wouldn't take much to tip the apple cart with all these lies, would it?

Gotta go read the next chapter. be bvack in a mo!


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