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Reviews For The Rings

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 5:45 AM · Chapter: The Rings

This is a strange little scenerio, to say the least, but I LIKE IT!

The ramifications of this "link" could be a great help to Harry and might save Pansy - You know I have a soft spot in my heart for her. 

The last bit in the kitchen was a hoot!

Okay, now the spelling nazi in me jumped up and demanded attention, so :

"Each second that past made him"  should be passed 

"but I rustling of leaves"  did you mean the rustling

"The smell of back on eggs"  ? bacon and perhaps?

HE!HE!HE!

NEXT CHAPTER!



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you for pointing out those few things :)

This story will bew fun to write, that's for sure. I love her character, both the evil side and finding her loyal, 'friend' side :)



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