I thought this was wonderful, and very realistic in the portrayal of George's addiction and grief. The dialogue between Fred & George is very well done and made me laugh. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! The dialogue actually came to me first, and then I built the story around it. I am glad the emotion came through well, as well as the humor. I don't like to be completely angsty. I have to have at least one laugh in a Fred and George story, or it wouldn't be true to them! I appreciate the review!
Well, I, for one LOVED it, and I'd have voted for you, luv!
Pocket portrait, huh? It'll be like the portrait of Dorian Grey done with laughs . . . HE!HE!HE!
Great little story and good view of grief process and how hard it really is to get through it.
Author's Response: I thought George would want to keep Fred close to him, kind of like he was when he was alive. I don't envision him carrying him around all the time, though. Just for that night, and that time. Thanks for the great review! I appreciate it!
I read this on the thread at EHPF, and I loved it. It made me tear up to 'see' George talking to his lost brother's portrait about the pain he was in. So well done, it made me feel like an idiot. 10/10!
Author's Response: You are definitely NOT and idiot. Thanks for the great words of encouragement though. I love my twins, and I wanted to show how George had to fight his way back. That, and a Fred/George conversation was SO much fun to write. They are great characters. I hate that JK killed him. I always try to figure out a plausible way I could bring him back, but I haven't found a believable one yet. If I do, I'm writing him back! Thanks for the review!