Gluttony: Fanfiction
Indulge Yourself!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/10 10:28 PM · Chapter: Chapter 3 : Mister Harry Potter
When did I miss this one? I've read the rest. I loved the bit about Teddy. Having Hermione connect them all to the Internet would be the next logical step, yes! I can see it. I'm not sure about Kreacher tricking Walburga into accepting Harry as Master of the Manor, but it works for you here. Very well done, as are all the rest.

Author's Response: posted this last March, just as my mother-in-law was taken ill and I've not gotten back to it, but plan to soon. Thanks for the review and I think if you let the bit about old lady Black just slide, it works . . . maybe House Elf magic IS strong enough to bambuzzle her, so WHY NOT have a little peace and quiet and let Harry treat the old girl with a little gentlemanly defference and live his life with the newest family "member". Lots of luck with the THON, as it looks like you and I are just about even . . . so, onward and upward, dear!


Name: Collette (Anonymous) · Date: 17/03/09 7:22 PM · Chapter: Chapter 2 : Mr. & Mrs. Arthur Weasley, Miss Ginny Weasley
love it!especially the part about molly planning her only daughter's wedding. great stuff.

Author's Response:

I'm posting a chapter a week, so check back this Friday or Saturday for the next one.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.



Name: Collette (Anonymous) · Date: 17/03/09 7:09 PM · Chapter: Chapter 1: Mrs. Andromeda Tonks, Master Teddy Lupin
interesting. andromeda sounds to much like neville's gran in my opinion. i love teddy though.

Author's Response: She IS a grandmom, silly; she's Teddy's Gran. (Tonks was her daughter, remember!?) 


Name: Collette (Anonymous) · Date: 17/03/09 6:56 PM · Chapter: Prologue
i didn't know draco's middle name.
or astoria's.
pretty neat to know.

Author's Response:

I made them both up!

HE!HE!HE!



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/09 12:09 AM · Chapter: Chapter 2 : Mr. & Mrs. Arthur Weasley, Miss Ginny Weasley

Nice!

Good to see that Arthur and Molly are still frisky, as they used to say on "Happy Days"! Can't wait to see who's next.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked that little bit. HE!HE!HE! ( That was the voice of experience speaking - my son and his 2 kids live with us )

Well, in the next "invitation" you'll get a lot more info as to what's been happening over the last 5 years since the battle. 

So, stay stuned, as it were. ( 12 Grimauld Place )



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/09 3:14 AM · Chapter: Chapter 1: Mrs. Andromeda Tonks, Master Teddy Lupin

Teddy is so cute here!

I hope there's no "ring bearer fiasco" coming! One problem I had, and maybe you'll explain, when did they all start liking each other again?



Author's Response:

5 year olds are always a little smarter than we give them credit for being, aren't they?  BUT, since they can't read, they have to figure things out on their own and they usually miss it by this <   > much.  And that makes for some giggles.

I'm glad I got you thinking about the "togetherness" bit this early, but don't fret, as each invitation is delivered, you'll learn a little about what happened to get everyone to this point in their relationships.

The other main question should be "how did Winky wind up at Malfoy Manor"?

HE!HE!HE!



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/09 6:03 PM · Chapter: Prologue
I thought I left you a review for this one? I'm sure I did...anyway...keep going! I'm interested to see how this wedding turns out.

Author's Response:

You did leave a review, my darling, but I had a senior moment and forgot that prologues, although shorter than actual chapters, still have to have 800 words, so Elena asked me to fix it.

HOWEVER, somewhere in that process, my chapter AND the two reviews were lost (accidentally deleted ). SO, I'm starting all over again and take it from here,  I also lost the summary, which I can't remember, so I'll have to re-write that, too and put it in later.

And how was your week?  HE!HE!HE!

p.s. thanks for the review and I've got this prickly feeling that this "short story' is going to take on a life of it's own . . . I may wind up with a series ( a terrifying thought! ) 



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