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Reviews For The Valentine

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 3:23 PM · Chapter: The Valentine
Other than all that moosh at the end, quite well done. The outbursts between the two of them were great!

Author's Response:

The moosh is the best part!!!!

Thank you for the reaview though :) I enjoyed them fighting!!!



Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 3:00 PM · Chapter: The Valentine

AW . . .  that was cute.  Young love, short tempers . . a typical day ( Valentines Day ) at Hogwarts.  Same stuff, different generation.

Okay, now the spelling/typo nazi rears her head:

"your brain is surrounded by a think layer " how about THICK

"Do you think wee should warn"  WE. . . perhaps?

It's nice to know that even our beloved Admin. has the occasional brain burp!

HE!HE!HE!



Author's Response:

Ahhhh, Holly!!! Thank you for pointing out my errors...There were way more, but I actually picked up on them...LOL..And that brain burp is NOT occasional...Its permanent...Shhhhhhhhhh

Thank you for the review, you know we love you for them. Glad you liked the story.



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