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Reviews For Coitus Interruptus

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 12/04/09 8:28 PM · Chapter: Coitus Interruptus

HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA!HA! * gasp!* HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!HE!

BEEN THERE  . . . . . .DONE THAT!!!!!!!

( comes with the territory - welcome to parenthood )



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it.  Remember to breathe, please.  :)


Name: SiriuslyPeeved (Signed) · Date: 10/04/09 1:03 PM · Chapter: Coitus Interruptus
I think you did well with the tone of this piece, it is romantic without being too over the top. The last line made me die laughing. (makes you wonder how families ever expand past one child, but I guess it happens!) Thanks for the laugh, I needed that!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it.  The scene had to be 15+ because it was originally posted in a forum at eHPF, otherwise I would have taken it into 'romance novel' territory. 

A good reason my wife and I don't have kids.

I love a good humourous piece.



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