This is a great start! I'm intrigued, and want to see more!
Date: September 17, 2009 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Thanks(: There may or may not be more. Its hard to decide... As there is so much going on.
2 things . . . . .
1: This is the start of a VERY riveting story and I can't wait to see where you go with this. So . . . if I'm guessing correctly, we have our three canon characters, don't we? This is going to get good!
2 I'm going to e-mail you with a few bits that didn't read correctly to me and I don't want to see this story being less than your usual perfection! Nothing major, but worrying to me, . . . it's the Mom-mom in me I suppose.
I think so and okay Holly...LOL...
I think it'll turn out to be a very good story :)