Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 31/01/10 10:36 PM · Chapter: Her Eyes.

That was, without a doubt, the most powerful, riveting, believable description of what happened to Frank and Alice Longbottom I have ever read . . . and I've read a LOT of Potter fan fics in the last few years.


I could hardly finish it, it almost hurt to watch the progression of the torture, and Bella's madness.

Wonderful, insightful, well thought out story.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/10 12:24 PM · Chapter: Her Eyes.
I didn't realize it had to be Bella and the Longbottoms until I was almost done with it. Excellent little piece, with such a buildup that keeps you wondering who it is and why they're there!

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