Brilliant characterization of Ron throughout. Short, sad, angsty piece, full of emotions.
Without saying too much, giving away too many facts of when all this had happened, we learn about their fates from the last member of the Golden Trio.
Accio Kleenex! Good job.
Zoltan (datbenik513 basically everywhere)
PS: It's just pure coincidence that I'd written a similar short piece titled "Elements" quite a few months ago. I'd love to hear your thoughts on that one.
Hahahaha, I wish I could accio something D:
Yeah, it killed me a little inside when I wrote this. I don't know my decision to write this came about..it just kinda happened. And ron's my favoritee!
I'll definitely give your story a look :) Thanks for reviewing!
Katrina
Touching, and just vague enough on timeframe and cause of death to make one wonder when it happened. Well done.
Yay! I'm glad, because I really strugged with this one. (1) I love Ron and (2) I didn't know how to start it so I ended up writing a bunch of different things and eventually shmushed them all together. I was really worried about the flow of this. I'm glad it all worked out and thanks for the great feedback :D