Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/10 1:21 AM · Chapter: One.

I'm not sure about the timing, but I'm thinking Harry would have to be 5 months old here? I think he might be a bit too active for that age? Then again, my own experiences with babies! It was a very pleasant read, but about halfway through, I think there's something missing: "The creature opened up its huge mouth and croaked, the sound echoing and bouncing off the walls. Harry jumped, frightened at the amphibian's sudden sound. He looked up at"

Then it cuts off. Other than that, it was an enjoyable little Christmas story and I really liked the interaction of the characters.

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