Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/10 1:01 PM · Chapter: I

The first thing that comes to mind is the saying, "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned." I think it's a good capture of the hurt of betrayal, without being too over the top.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the positive feedback! I'm so happy that you enjoyed this, and thought I did well writing her feelings of betrayal and emotions. Also, I'm sorry it took so long to respond, but I really do appreciate you taking the time to review after reading; Thanks again!

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