Gluttony: Fanfiction
Indulge Yourself!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 05/06/08 1:13 AM · Chapter: stars shining (so) bright
I really liked this! I love your writing, so that's not a surprise, but I loved the simplicity of it. Just a nice James/Lily story without anything too dramatic, just a walk together, and a realization that they could end up together, or at least James isn't such a jerk anymore. I loved how you had James sharing the Invisibility Cloak together and I loved Lily's realizations that James wasn't as terrible as she once thought. Beautiful story!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you - you've made my day!


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