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Name: Shiloh (Anonymous) · Date: 12/07/10 2:46 AM · Chapter: Prologue

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This was lovely Leslie m'dear! I don't really have anything bad to say about this. It's wonderful! I will say that the description gets a bit muddled. But over all I absolutely love this.

I'm sooooo sorry it took me so long to get to this review. And it sucks.




Name: kaityb (not signed in) (Anonymous) · Date: 21/06/10 4:16 AM · Chapter: Chapter 2

Another great chapter Leslie!


I really liked your idea here of going back and developing on Allie's character a bit more prior to her kidnapping. I think it really set up the foundations and allows the reader to be more sympathetic to her. Not that they don't, but its definately heightened. I also really liked your description because it was a nice mix and not heavy.


In all, another lovely update! Well done!





Name: kaityb (not signed in) (Anonymous) · Date: 08/06/10 7:25 PM · Chapter: Chapter 1



This really was yet another wonderful chapter!


I thought that you really developed her family well here and really set down the foundaitions for a great story. Your use of description was also wonderful and kept the pace without taking anything away. It truely was flawless.


This was another wonderful chapter and I really must commend you on trying your hand at original fiction, you are definately succeeding!





Name: kaityb (not signed in) (Anonymous) · Date: 30/05/10 2:40 AM · Chapter: Prologue


You mentioned this in the cbox over on tgs so I thought I would drop by and read it and consequently review.

I really liked the idea of this story, I think you have set up the scene perfectly and really kicked the plot off with a bang. You have captured the darker side of this event and I really liked it!

I really want to know what happens next so update soon, this was excellent! :)



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks so much, Kaity! This story has been brewing for almost a year now, yet I'm just not starting to really give it the attention that it so deserves and try my hand at writing it. And I am quite happy t hear that you think I've set the tone of this story as I'm quite unsure when I set out to write something dark. Thanks again! I really do appreciate your feedback!

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