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Reviews For Paper Hearts

Name: SiriuslyPeeved (Signed) · Date: 17/07/10 9:45 AM · Chapter: Fall and Fall Again
This was lovely, don't sell yourself short. It fits nicely into canon, giving Minerva a very personal reason to fight alongside Dumbledore. I think you packed a lot of emotion and spare, but effective description into a compact package. Great job.


Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 01/07/10 3:21 PM · Chapter: Fall and Fall Again

WOW!

What a riveting story . . . and a ship I'd never heard of or even considered, but I guess that Tom and Minerva would have been at Hogwarts at about the same time, though, wouldn't they?  Oh dear, did I just see a plot bunny poke his nose out from under my bed and sniff  . . . oh dear , oh dear, we are in troublt now . . HE!HE!HE!

Only one slight boo-boo: "The angel begins to take place before you" I think you meant to use the word shape and you used place in the next sentence . . . sometimes our brains are a step or two ahead of our fingers.

Otherwise . . .bloody brilliant!



Name: Elena (Signed) · Date: 26/06/10 9:58 PM · Chapter: Fall and Fall Again

A very compelling story :) I actually enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing it with us.



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