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Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 25/02/12 11:01 PM · Chapter: Vampire Damselflies

Just so much good stuff in this one! I really feel for these kids, and wondering where Malfoy is? I'm sure we'll find out.



Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Scorpius will be making an appearance in a future chapter .... though to be honest with you, I haven't decided whether he's a friend or an antagonist. Maybe some of both. I had a really good time writing the letter from Luna, and figuring out the ways the twins would be different personalities. (Lorcan washes his hair too much...) I'm so glad you liked the new chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Scorpius will be making an appearance in a future chapter .... though to be honest with you, I haven't decided whether he's a friend or an antagonist. Maybe some of both. I had a really good time writing the letter from Luna, and figuring out the ways the twins would be different personalities. (Lorcan washes his hair too much...) I'm so glad you liked the new chapter.


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 25/02/12 10:53 PM · Chapter: Daring, Nerve, and Chivalry

I saw one mistake, I think: Lysander was first to be called on the Ravenclaw side. He'd flown as a kid at home... - Isn't Lysander the Gryffindor? Other than that, loved it. Wondered who else got hurt? Onward, as Holly used to say!



Author's Response: Oooops, you're right! Thanks so much, I will catch that next time I update!


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 25/02/12 10:44 PM · Chapter: Sticky Buns and Haggis

Staring again at reading, just got the RSS for the new chapter. I do so love this story! Wish I'd thought to use the Scamander boys in my own works. Great touch!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was lucky to get a good challenge, they wouldn't have occurred to me either, but I love thinking about what Luna and Rolf would have been like as parents and how much time the kids would have spent with the Potters. I appreciate it!


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/10 12:39 AM · Chapter: Daring, Nerve, and Chivalry

Poor kid! I can see Neville being very sympathic, though! After all, it happened to him, too. The brotherly love is  a nice touch, too. After reading so much other stuff with James and Albus hating each other, this is refreshing. Carry on!



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Chapter 2! Thank you. I hope to show the Potter boys' struggles to cope with Albus's House assignment without taking the focus away from the main characters. It's a lot of fun for me to work with this set of characters without having read a lot of Next-Gen (other than yours ;) ).


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/10 10:51 AM · Chapter: Sticky Buns and Haggis

I like it.

I wonder why Albus is alone and miserable, which is something new for me to read in a fic. Then again, I don't get out much...

I also like the idea of the S. twins being separated, and at this age. I wish I'd thought of that. Wondering how hard it's going to be on Lysander?

Victoire seems a bit on the b*tchy side, though. I have to think about where this is going, but then again, there are those Veela genes! Could be interesting.

I think it's off to a great start!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I haven't really read that much next-gen either, so I'm hoping I'm presenting it from a fresh perspective. I'll be writing more about Albus and his struggles to adjust to being in Slytherin -- James's reaction is a little extreme, but I'm trying to stay in character for his age. This is one of those challenge pieces that might end up taking on a life of its own, and becoming a full length story... I'm having too much fun with it at present! Thanks again.


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