Very easily one of, if not THE best piece from your pen I've had the pleasure to read so far.
Very strong, visual writing, pretty much in the style of "Sitting in the Orange Tree", yet even more adult, even more complex, perfected to 24 carats pure gold.
One can see you are clearly interested in the theme of the Afterlife and this small piece does justice to your fame. The closing paragraph is one that will haunt you for a long time and will make you keep asking questions that most probably will never be answered.
'Nuff said, brilliant work. MORE, PLEASE!