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Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 17/12/10 4:39 PM · Chapter: The Truth about the Diadem of Ravenclaw

This was just amazing! I love the connections, and the emotional capture. Salazar in love...imagine that! I just wonder how is going to find the parchment now? Excellent read!



Name: datbenik513 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/10 2:46 AM · Chapter: The Truth about the Diadem of Ravenclaw

This is why we love to read your stories. Given, tastes differ, but no one can deny you are one of the most talented writers in HP fanfic land.

Impeccable punctuation and grammar, beautifully flowing sentences... you're really a master of the pen.

I loved the setting, the Otherworldly appearance of lady Ravenclaw, telling this story of her life. A subtle twist on a thousand-year old tale, still unmistakably Elena. After thousand years of nothingness, she'd found eternal love, after all.

The thought the dead communicating with the living is interesting. In your take, a parchment that had been written by Rowena and sent through time-and-no-time, space-and-no-space, to the generations to come. Eerie, yet intriguing, leaving me screaming for a sequel. Leave that to the most brilliant witch of the century to solve this mystery!

Bravo, thanks, and salutations. A true little masterpiece.

 



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