There's nothing like recapturing a childhood memory. I think this one is quite well done, with good characterization of the girls. Although I have to admit that I don't know much about little girls! ;) You have captured and put into words some very touchy subjects, though, and done it with class. I am sure that very many of us can relate to the girls' problems here.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. It's hard to write something so based on personal experience while being objective enough to make it into a good story, I've had that problem often in the past! Thanks!