okay, its time to get back to writing.
You have a really good story going here.
i hope you come back soon to give us another chapter
My plan was that this would be it. Hannah will, eventually, track down her other's killer, but that is another tale.
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Your line about all the platitudes and even lies at funerals is the hard truth. I've been through enough of them to know that anyone who says "If there's anything I can do for you..." is to be immediately smacked upside the head! It's a great capture of grief and the underlying desire for revenge, too. Well done.
Thanks. I've been to a few funerals myself, I'm glad that my experience wasn't unique.
This will be another three chaptered story. More soon.