Name: riverwind54 (Signed) · Date: 11/01/14 9:14 PM · Chapter: Chapter 1

A good start to a story, it leaves me looking for more so I hope you add to it.



Author's Response:


as soon as winters over, I hope to get back to writing

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 22/03/13 5:43 AM · Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the premise so far, although it seems a bit rushed and is a bit confusing at the beginning. It took a bit to figure out the table bit. Perhaps a bit more explanation, but other than that, really enjoyed the backstory as well.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

I will go back through and put in a little bit of filler to make the premise clearer

also happy to see someone is visiting the site besides myself.

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