Reviews For Egregious Affair

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 6:13 PM · Chapter: I. Indulge
Wow, I would have never thought of a Teddy/Hermione ship. It's interesting and I look forward to seeing more of it. I'm not sure I like it yet, but that's because I love Teddy/Victoire so much that it's just difficult to think of them separated. I really want to know what's going on with Victoire because again, I'm confused with that part, though I like that I'm confused. I like that you just jumped into the action without explanation. I like being able to figure things out going along. Great job so far and I'm looking forward to more!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 6:07 PM · Chapter: Prologue
Wow, this is already so wonderful, just like your other stories. I'm not exactly sure what's going on yet, but I love the interaction between Teddy and Victoire and the desperation in both of them. I love how you've characterized them so far and I love your writing. Off to read more!

Name: Masked Beauty (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 1:10 PM · Chapter: I. Indulge
ahhh, how did i know that the other woman was hermione. (okay, fine, it was in the summary, but pfft.) i'm not a big fan of teddy/hermione, but you made it seem plausible in a way that it was almost appealing to me. heh. i still think that victoire is better for teddy. speaking of victoire, she got kidnapped! pooey. i need to know what happens next.

10/10 (like i could give you anything lower than that, your writing is so good.)

Name: Masked Beauty (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 12:52 PM · Chapter: Prologue
aha! i left a review for this story on HPFF and it's here! with two chappies, none the less! now if i can just find my review...

Oh, wow. Very emotional beginning to a story, but it suits your style of writing. :) You slowly feed vague, foggy information to the reader which I quite like as it adds mystery and plot. Victoire and Teddy are already well characterized even in the beginning stages of the story. Wonderful description and staging. You plop the reader right into the story.

I like it already.


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