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Veterans of Hogwarts by ginwannabe

Rated: R15+ • 59 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Photobucket
Awesome banner by Serendip @ SAYS!

As those who fought in the Battle of Hogwarts return for their final year, will the bonds forged in battle bring them closer together, or drive them apart.
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

What a good story. I can't wait to read the rest. You write Luna well, too. I forgot about plimpy soup.

Author's Response: Welcome to Gluttony, Ginny! Thanks so much for reading. I\'m glad you like it. I can only do Luna in small doses, lol. I can only do \"out there\" for so long. :o)

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Settling In

I love the line about honoring the people who died by living life to the fullest and not getting bogged down in the past... That was very fitting and is also true for life in general. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. It\'s hard sometimes not to dwell on all that\'s been lost, but really if we don\'t move on we won\'t ever live. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story! :o)

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Of Snogging and Snacks

Yea, pudding! You sure do remember what Luna likes to eat.

I liked your kitchen segment with the house elves. And I especially liked how Kreatcher called Ron 'the Weasely'.

Author's Response: LOL...I guess Luna\'s favorite foods stick out in my mind...I never really made that connection. But I don\'t think I have Luna talking about much of anything else besides food, lol. God bless Kreacher. He really turned himself around, right. Thanks again! :o)

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 24/04/08 Title: Chapter 4: Happy Christmas

Yea, Neville. I love his character and it's so nice how you put him together with someone. He deserves a wonderful girl and your portrayl of Hannah shows her as one.

Author's Response: I adore Neville, and I\'ve had so much fun writing him (and I avoided him for a while because I didn\'t think I could do him justice...or maybe it was because I felt I had to put him with Luna and she terrifies me, lol). I was nervous about writing Hannah, too, I think because we know so little about her. But I realized, she\'s virtually a blank slate for me, so I\'ve been making her my own, and she\'s turning out to be the perfect match for Neville! Thanks for reading, Ginny! :o)

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 5: Midnight Discussions

I liked how you subtly hinted about psychology and therapy. Hermoine would be the one smart enough to have sought it out. They really did go through a lot and would have a lot of healing to do. That is one of the things I like best in all the stories I have read by you, you take into consideration the aftermath of what happened and it's emotional reprecutions in a very realistic way. (Sorry for all the spelling errors, I'm hopeless without spell check). Can't wait to see what happens next in your BAS chapter!

Author's Response: These guys have a lot of healing to do. It\'s not that it won\'t happen, it\'ll just take time. Thanks for reading! :o)

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 28/04/08 Title: Chapter 6: Boys and Their Egos

That was too funny and too true! My favorite part was Hermoine using the silencing charm on Ron. Boy, wouldn't that be nice to have in a heated discussion. I also like how she forgot she had used it and as she waited for Ron to respond. But in the end I think, like you said, the moral of the story is BAS. Well done!

Author's Response: LOL...yes BAS...but we love them anyway. Oh what I wouldn\'t give to be able to use the Silencio charm...mostly on my kids though ;o) Thanks again! :o)

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Moving On

Ah, the goblin rebellion, I believe Snape is supposed to be somewhat of an expert on that. I can't remember if that's fan fic talking or cannon. I'm really impressed with this concept (VOH) and enjoyed reading the chapters. I also liked that Ginny and Hermoine are going to get a flat together, so they can have uninterrupted snogging sessions when they are able to see there men. Great Job!

Author's Response: Thanks again! Now I can\'t wait for you to read Hair of the Dog, lol. I think I see about 3 more chapters for this story, to round it out to an even 10. We have to finish off the year of Hogwarts, have the first VoH alumni meeting, and then send the boys off to Auror training. I spent a lot of time researching this chapter setting the foundation for the futures of all these characters and trying to make things as authentic as possible. I love the idea of Ginny and Hermione living together, but you\'ll see in HotD that they have a few issues, lol. Thanks for reading...I think I need to spend some time on this story this weekend, along with getting ready for game night!

For The Greater Good by gryffindorseeker

Rated: MA18+ • 8 Reviews starstarstarstarstar

Formerly "The Life and Lies of Albus Dumbledore" at HPFF

Head Boy. Straight O student. Recipient of a dozen prestigious awards. Albus Dumbledore is anything but your average seventeen-year-old. Follow him through the most formulative year of his life as his friendships with Elphias Doge and Helena Peverell shift and he meets a very interesting young man named Gellert Grindelwald.

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 19/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Family Ties

You did an excellent job of describing Albus' home life. It was very sad and it made him more relatable to the future HP characters. He has parallels with Snape's life and his friend is an orphan like Riddle. It also shows why Albus loves Hogwarts so much, like most of the characters, it is his real home. Nicely done!

Good-bye my love by InsanityRulz

Rated: R15+ • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: This is a story of a grieving Severus Snape when he hears of Lily Potter's death.
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 29/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Good-bye my love

Interesting take. I liked how you set it up and how you confusing it must have been for both sides in that moment in time when the Potters died and Voldemort disappeared. I love Snape and Lily stories. It was such a tortured love affair for Severus, wasn't it? I have written a story about them, too.

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for reviewing :) Yeah, I know how it must have been for him :( I'll definitely check out your story!! Thank you so much, once again :)

Bedtime for Fred by WeasleyTwinMom

Rated: R12+ • 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: A day in the life of Fred Weasley, age 3. His first realization that he and George are twins.
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 26/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a sweet, touching story. I don't have twins, but I have two little boys and you write about motherhood very realistically. I found the concept of being a twin very interesting and I really liked your descriptions and explainations. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have two little boys also, they\'ll be 4 in September, so 3 year old identical twin boys wasn\'t a big stretch for me haha. The indifference toward mirrors and throwing the clothes around their room are pretty much directly from my boys. I\'m so glad you enjoyed the story, thank you for reviewing!

The Hair of the Dog by ginwannabe

Rated: R15+ • 5 Reviews starstarstarstar
Perfect banner made by Marauder By Night over at SAYS! Thank you so much!

A year and a half after the final battle, Hermione is having a very bad day.
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! It made me laugh. I especially like when Hermoine said, "J-o-o" and "I'm n-o-o-o-t". That was very funny and believable. I could totally hear her saying it. This is my favorite humorus story you have done. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much, Ginny. Poor Hermione, all alone, while her man has a gorgeous blonde chasing after him...even if he\'s clueless to it. I\'m glad you enjoyed it! :o)

Black Wolf by evil little devil

Rated: MA18+ • 9 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star

Black Wolf banner

  Banner by the amazing Violet at TDA

Read the tale of a forbidden love. A love that has the power to sever friendships and destroy lives. The love of a werewolf and a Death Eater

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 28/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an interesting concept. Bellatrix is such a feral person, maybe that's what attracts her to Remus. I just have an ominus feeling that this will all end very badly.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Considering Bellatrix turns into a psychotic murderer you can pretty much guess it won't end all that well, lol. Thanks for reviewing.

Family Comes First by Elena

Rated: MA18+ • 1 Reviews

Fantastic, beautiful banner by chiQs09 at EHPF

The decisions you make in any family are never easy. However, when you are a Black and a Malfoy, things are much more difficult.

This story was written for a story collaboration on SAYS for their Blackfest Competition.

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Family Comes First

It was very nice to see Narcissa and Lucius as a loving couple. I also liked your explaination for why Narcissa lied to Voldemort. I like that it was pre meditated and that Lucius also agreed. Nicely done!

Voyeuristic Ways by Elena

Rated: R15+ • 2 Reviews

Watching and learning are two very excellent qualities to possess. What happens when you use these qualities for personal gain?

Written for the Valentines Day Fic Exchange on SAYS - This was written for Delta :) 

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Voyeuristic Ways

Very nice. I don't often enjoy Severus/Hermoine ships, but good writting is good writting. You have captured Severus very well. (He is the main character in all my stories). He's so fun to play with. And your dead right about him being voyeurist.

Catalyst by ginwannabe

Rated: R15+ • 15 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Neville has always been a loyal and brave follower. But what was the catalyst that turned him into a leader in the fight against evil? Brilliant banner by the fantastic serendip over at SAYS. Thanks, Ali!  Winner of the Pure Indulgence Best One-Shot award :D!
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Catalyst

Wow! This is absolutely my favorite story that you have written. It is very difficult to pull off first person writting well (I've never even attempted it). You did a superb job. I also loved how you portrayed Luna. You have an excellent sense of her character (and she's an elusive person to begin with). Not to mention the wicked hard challenge. I am never going to ask Gubby for a challenge. So all in all, well done. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Ginny! I\'m working on Luna...she\'s a tough nut to crack, erm...write. I can\'t tell you how much it means to me that you think I\'ve done her well. It was a difficult challenge, but honestly, I really enjoyed it, but if you ever take on a Gubby challenge do NOT ask for specifics...oi! She\'ll back you into a corner with them, lol. Thanks for reading! :o)

Shattered by ginwannabe

Rated: MA18+ • 8 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star

Life is a wonderful thing. Until it shatters around you.

Shattered Banner

Earth shattering banner by the wonderful Blue Suede Shoes @ SAYS! 


Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, sweetie.  I'm so proud of you for writing this.  It breaks my heart to read it. 

Author's Response: Thanks!  It was different writing original fiction rather than hiding behind the characters and world that JKR created.  Creating characters from scratch...that's a whole different ballgame.  Thanks for reading!  :o)

Show Me the Way by ginwannabe

Rated: R15+ • 4 Reviews starstarstarstar

As Harry has learned of Dumbledore's past, he struggles to come to terms his feelings of betrayal as once more his faith in one he trusted is tested.

This story is based on the song, Show Me the Way by Styx and is set during Deathly Hallows, between chapters 18-19 in the American edition.

Banner made by Blue_Suede_Shoes @ SAYS!  It's lovely, thank you, Em. 

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 26/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me the Way

Awesomeness.  This is such a great story on so many levels.  You may not enjoy it, but you can write angst beautifully.  How many times have we all been in that forest waiting and cursing to the heavens?  Of course, I love the story all the more, because it is Snape that gives Harry the answer.  I am so touched that you had Harry unknowingly thank him.  Beautifully done!

Author's Response: Thanks Ginny!  I think we've all cursed the heavens and asked for a sign at some point in our lives, I just tapped into that.  I'm glad you had a chance to read this one! :o)

Definitions by carlysue22

Rated: R15+ • 2 Reviews
Summary: Emily is perfect in her step mother's eyes. She is smart, pretty, and follows all the rules, except when she's at Hogwarts. The one place her step mother can't watch her every move. When that changes she has to decide who she is; the girl that does everything perfectly or the girl who knows how to have fun. Then she meets Sirius Black and realizes she doesn't have just those two options she has a third also. Just to be herself.
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Perfect

Boy, is this too close for comfort.  I had that stepmother, but thankfully only every other weekend.  I bet Emily is counting down the days 'til she graduates.

Voldemort the Great by icefire_lioness

Rated: MA18+ • 1 Reviews
Summary: Harry Potter finds Voldie's diary. Is it what we expect? Ah, no. Not really. Comic Hijinks ensue! Pimples, cold soup, exploding toilets! MALNUTRITION IN THE SAME SENTENCE AS LOVE!
Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 30/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

V. funny!

Gluttony's Christmas Competition 2008 by Gluttony

Rated: MA18+ • 37 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star

Read the entries for the competition here. The Author's will be revealed once voting has closed and a winner has been announced.

Reviewer: potterverse Signed
Date: 13/12/08 Title: Chapter 5: Reverie by pookha

What a lovely story, about a very undeveloped couple.  I really like how you portray Luna and her husband.   I don't usually like first person narrative, but you did a very good job.  I'm a huge Luna fan.  Well, done.