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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 19/09/2008 04:59 pm · Chapter: Hold the Insomniac

Well I didn't see THAT coming, I thought Ron and Hermione ahd had a fight and she was giving him the cold shoulder and ROn, as susal, was clueless about how to apologize, being too stubborn to admit he's screwed up about something, AGAIn.

WRONG, WRONG, WRONG!!!!!!!!!

Severus . . . . they were only nightmares because Lily wasn't really there, but why didn't he just treat them for what they were, and enjoy them. . . maybe as practice for a future life WITH Lily.

Oh well, it's just a dream . . . life.



Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 06:56 pm · Chapter: Hold the Insomniac
Wow... this is gorgeous! So sad... it's written very well. I'm normally not a fan of Severus, but you've written him differently here; many people tend to make him very unlikable, but I sympathize with him here. I love this, and I'm off to read more of your stories! Great job!

Blaire


Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 03/09/2008 07:30 pm · Chapter: Hold the Insomniac
This is so heart wrenching. Severus led such a frustrating and painful life, and Lily was that "life raft in slippers" he so desperately needed. It is such a shame that he blew it with her, and spent the rest of his life paying for that mistake dearly. This is written so beautifully. Lovely work, really.


Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 26/05/2008 04:03 am · Chapter: Hold the Insomniac
There is nothing worse than those nights where all you want is sleep and you finally doze off, only to wake up and find that it's only been 20 minutes since the last time you looked at the clock.  Poor Severus, and that he keeps dreaming of Lily.  You can fell the confliction in him...the desperation to get some sleep vs his desire for Lily to really be there and not sleeping at all.  Speaking of which...it's time for me to take a tylenol pm and get some sleep myself ;o).

Author's Response: I agree 100%. That's one of the worst feelings. This is the only time I've written Snape, and I liked it a lot more than I thought I would. I feel so bad for him and his unrequited love for Lily, and it makes him such an interesting character.rnrnI hope you get some rest, Taryn. :) Thanks for reviewing!


Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 15/05/2008 06:20 am · Chapter: Hold the Insomniac
That was a beautiful story. I thought the lyrics went really well with it and I thought it was really well written. It's so sad, but at least there's a bit of hope at the end. I think Lily/Snape is such a great ship, and you were able to show how Snape really cared for her in this. Very emotional story! I loved it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Jamie. :) I was never much for Lily/Snape (mostly because I never gave it a chance), but this was something I just really wanted to write and it went with their characters. Thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. :)


Name: fhestia (Signed) · Date: 11/03/2008 02:27 am · Chapter: Hold the Insomniac
Very atmospheric and a great read; I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! This piece meant a lot to me when I wrote it, so I'm very happy you liked it. : )rnrn-Rose


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