Gluttony: Fanfiction
Indulge Yourself!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 03:55 pm · Chapter: Love
Wow, I really liked that! I would have never suspected that at the end. I really liked the voice throughout this whole story, and I thought you did a great job at getting Lily's story across. Great story!


Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 08/06/2008 04:40 pm · Chapter: Love
Ali...I know I reviewed this over on HPFF, but it deserved a second read!  I love how you keep the reader guessing as to who Lily is really in love with, and Peter is so unexpected!  You kept me curious and shocked me, which takes some talent!  I know some wouldn't think that Lily/Peter would even be a possibility (me being one of them) but it's still written so well, I don't even mind that it's not very plausible ;o).  Well done!


Name: carlysue22 (Signed) · Date: 16/04/2008 12:23 am · Chapter: Love
WOW. I was not expecting that at all! that was really good! *adds to favorites*

Author's Response: YAY! Thanks Carly Sue!


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