Gluttony: Fanfiction
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Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/2009 07:32 am · Chapter: Rogue

It's coming along nicely, yes.

I like how Sirius forgot all about Lily because he was hungry! Typical teenage boy.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all three reviews! And I'm sorry I didn't get to respond until now. =] Thanks so much though, and I hope to have the next chapter up soon! -Tamara


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/2009 11:40 pm · Chapter: Grindylow Juice

Very good with the exploding Grindylow!

Characterization for your intent is good, too, on the both of them.



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/2009 05:43 am · Chapter: You're No Fun

This is off to a good start. To me, you've got the characterization going well so far. I look forward to more!

One thing, I think it's officially called "The Black Lake" instead of the "Great Lake"?



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