This story is very hard to review. Partly, because I can't seem to find the proper words to express my fascination, Partly, because a good review should contain constructive criticism, but I can't find anything to criticise.
Your language is almost Shakespearean. It's immediately obvious, after reading the very first sentences, that you love writing and you have mastered this beautiful art as only a handful fanfic writers I'm lucky to have met have. Honestly, such beautiful English simply doesn't exist!!!
I need to give an extra kudos for picking Barty Crouch Jr. He is such a great protagonist/antagonist in one and a very much underestimated character. You own him. Full stop. I have tried to write him in my WIP "Seven deadly sins" but now, after reading this story, I'm seriously considering to delete it...
Thanks for this wonderful, refreshing reading experience.
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