Gluttony: Fanfiction
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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 24/02/2010 09:49 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Very sweet . . . and although I loath Valentine's Day , this was a nice litle story for Lily/James. . . it just happensed to be Valentine's Day.

Made me realize that they both died at, what, 22 years of age? Jeez! Not much time together - at least on this plane of existance.  

Very nice.

Name: laugharama_llama (Signed) · Date: 20/02/2010 12:34 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

YAY FLUFF -pumps fist-

Kaityy that story made me drool over James.  He is quite possibly the sweetest guy ever.

Anyway.  So yeah this was wonderful!  I love how you started off with your angst (couldn't avoid it could you!) but then really flipped it around without me knowing.  Even when James came and said "Lily?" I thought it might not be James or something bad happened.  Hahaha, I dono.  But in the end, I was awing in my head like an idiot little girl, because that's just how sweet it was!

I absolutely loved the part when he talks to Harry!  AH so sweet :D  And that last line was just smile city :)


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/2010 11:17 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm not  a huge fan Valentine's Day, or "lovey, mooshy stuff," but this quite a nice piece. It reads well and captures the feelings. Ah, young love... No insult intended; I suppose it's a guy thing? ;-)

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