Gluttony: Fanfiction
Indulge Yourself!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 20/09/2010 08:24 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

That was . . . without a doubt . . . the silliest story I've ever taken the time to read . . .and I've read A LOT of stories on multiple sites.

What WERE you thinking . . .or better yet, what were you drinking/imbibing when you put "pen to paper"?  What ever it was  . . . I WANT SOME!!!!!!!!

It was SO awful . . . SO cliche ridden . . . SO "want to shake them until their teeth rattle" angsty . . . SO mind numbingly AWFUL . . . and I laughed myself breathless!   

GREAT change of pace, to put your tongue so firmly into your cheek that you'll have a permanent bump . . . I thank you for the best laugh I've had in a LONG while! 



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 28/08/2010 05:07 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Ah, the rampant cliches! I love it! Laughed all the way through it. Well done, and a good skewer for the cliche-driven writers.



Name: SiriuslyPeeved (Signed) · Date: 28/08/2010 03:13 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1
Hee hee! I giggled throughout this story. I absolutely loved the last line. Thanks for sharing the funny!


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