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Reviews For Evans

Name: AnimagusPenguin (Signed) · Date: 21/01/2011 03:32 pm · Chapter: Potter and Evans

Aw, this story is very cute. It's lovely for a quick read when you're in a rush. The plot could've been dragged out over lots of chapters, but this was short, sweet, and I think you pulled it off beautifully. :)



Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 18/01/2011 07:16 pm · Chapter: Potter and Evans

What an adorable story! And it's all the better because it's perfectly plasuible.   Good, lighthearted reading!

But watch your spacing, it's too far apart.



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