Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 13/09/2008 07:53 pm · Chapter: Christmas Eve

So Harry's actually thinking about it? He might be becoming a little more sensible? NOWAY! :P That's good, that he might finally be gaining some intelligence when it comes to Malfoy. An interesting chapter, definitely; you have the greatest knack for keeping your readers entertained. And that's a good last line there ;) Great job, Juls :D

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 13/09/2008 07:06 pm · Chapter: Reunion

I like this turn of the plot, I've got to say! I can't picture Snape being a father, but perhaps they will at some point become close... And what will Draco do when she finds out? It's interesting that the two people Mariah hates are her father and half-brother? Lots to think about, hahaha. Great job, Juls! :D Reading on right now ;)

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 13/09/2008 05:09 am · Chapter: Professor Can I Borrow the Portkey?

Ohhh, so she IS alive?! THAT's how it happens! :o *shocked* I really didn't expect that at all. But of course it makes sense because Draco thought she'd died, and I guess there was a fake grave or something? Did Narcissa know? Or am I on a completely wrong path? :P I guess I'll find out soon. Interesting turn of events! Great job here, Juls :D

Blaire

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 13/09/2008 04:01 am · Chapter: Beginnings

Harry, Harry, Harry... when are you going to let go? I liked the tension between Harry & Draco, and I think you've done a good job with Dumbledore's portrait.

I do love the way you ended this chapter. Makes me wonder what Harry's reaction is going to be when he finds Hermione with Draco? Doodley-doo.

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 10:42 pm · Chapter: Do You Trust Me?

Hmmm! So the plot thickens (again)! What with the Minerva and Dumbledore stuff - I mean, I think it's good to show that, even if it isn't technically meant to be romantic... which is what I'm taking it as, but maybe not *shrug* Either way... great chapter! :) We'll see what goes on next... ;)

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 09:52 pm · Chapter: Moving On

Awww, you didn't write the proposal scene between Harry and Ginny :( oh well :P I'm kind of surprised that Ginny isn't more... excited? Surprised? I dunno. But maybe Ginny's more of the type to be quieter about it. Especially in the seriousness of the time. Anyway, good chapter as usual, of course :) Kudos!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 08:44 pm · Chapter: The Next Step

Awww, this is a very nice chapter. I think I told you I'm not the biggest fan of Harry ships either, but in this story, it's kind of nice, and this scene especially was good. I'm kinda excited to read about him asking her! :D Great job, Juls!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 12:41 pm · Chapter: A Proposal

Oh, boy. The trouble with Mums like Molly, eh? *shakes head* But YAY for Tonks and Lupin! It was bound to happen sometime, huh? I love the comment the Healer makes :) The whole scene was written really well. The detail that Mariette Edgecombe is a DE is very interesting. I certainly never thought of that!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 03:08 am · Chapter: The Return

Ohhh, the plot thickens. Erm... a lot, hahaha. I like what's going on with Molly; the detail that she realized that Hermione and Ron weren't meant for each other. That's quite interesting, that a mother admits to seeing that.

I'll simply say that the Dramione stuff is interesting. Forgive me, okay? I still can't really critique it when I can't take it seriously. But you're a great writer, do NOT take my feelings for that ship as an insult to your writing. It's really a wonderful story :D

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 01:19 am · Chapter: The Depth of Friendship

:o Oh, you and your cliffhangers! Grr, I have to review first, but I want to know what happens next! Who the figure is! I think it could be Snape, but... oh, honestly! *headdesk* :P

This story is SO grabbing, you've constantly kept me interested and I hate having to stop and review because I really want to know what happens next! This is definitely a good sign - you're doing great :D

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 01:01 am · Chapter: Boundaries

Aha, that's brilliant! I love that it was Tonks instead. This time you surprised me, I admit. I simply thought that Augusta Longbottom would be stronger than Crabbe and Goyle took her for.

And... well, how interesting, with Harry and Ginny. And... yes, and Draco and Hermione... *sighs* I suppose I'm a bit like Harry in that sense, aren't I? I'll have to accept it to some degree... :P Great job, Juls :)

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 12/09/2008 12:13 am · Chapter: Transformations

Ohh, interesting turn there at the end! :o I wonder what will happen? Reading on is the only way to find out, obviously... :P I like that Harry's starting to come around a bit. Maybe he'll get some sense after all! :D Good job here :D

Blaire

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 07:36 pm · Chapter: Enter the Elves

Oi... how long did it take you to write those house-elves? Reminded me a bit of Jar-Jar Binks from The Star Wars movies, lol. I like how you wanted to include Neville and Luna. I understand why they can't at the moment, but the were instrumental in all the other battles with Death Eaters, including the final battle (although I know that doesn't count in this story). I'm getting back into reading this, so hopefully there'll be a few more reviews today.

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 12:30 pm · Chapter: The 'Talk'

Hahaha, I really like this chapter. Poor Remus, having to talk to the boys about that... *grins* The awkwardness, it's very fun. I especially love Ginny's words at the very end. I like that you don't give us Hermione's reaction. ;) Good job!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 02:40 am · Chapter: Revelations

Haha, I love Snape's last line :D I'm trying to believe that Harry and Malfoy will both stop being annoying prats sooner or later. It's good though, that you wrote it that way; if you had made them become friends immediately, it wouldn't have been believable. So good job! :) I'm going to call it a night, but I'll be back for more tomorrow :D

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 02:10 am · Chapter: Beginnings

Oh, so the physical lessons come next! Woo hoo! They sound... interesting :P And I really hope Harry shuts his trap soon, because honestly, how much proof do you need? (read: PHEONIX CHARM ON SKIN. LACK OF SKIN BURNING. duh..? :P) Anyway... yes, this story interests me. No, I don't want to comment on the Dramione-ness at this point. :P

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 01:58 am · Chapter: Enter the Elves

Twinky is so cute!!! *loves* I have an obsession with adorable things, and Twinky is definitely adorable :D I'm really looking forward to these lessons beginning, actually - it sounds very interesting. Challenging, of course - let's see how they take the pressure :P Great work!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 01:31 am · Chapter: Answers

Aha. Kind of clever, I have to say! So the Death Eaters didn't need/try to see the bodies then, right? Only the Ministry, which was just a lie? Awesome. ^_^ I've always liked Hermione's parents... thank goodness they're alive. And it sure did cheer Hermione up to learn she'd be doing advanced work, huh? :P Great work! *still not sure how she feels about Dramione*

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 11/09/2008 01:07 am · Chapter: Expect The Unexpected

I had a feeling! I DID! I knew something was up... evil Juls, hahaha. Waiting this long to tell me. :P

I like this chapter! I'm a little... iffy... about Draco and Hermione, but that's because I'm, you know, super against that kind of thing. I'm not running away screaming, so consider it a job well done, trust me. ;) Kudos :)

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 10:08 pm · Chapter: Facing Fears

Ooooh, I like Remus's remark there at the end. I hope that had an effect on Harry. They certainly are both being idiots... though I think Malfoy's a little more understandable. He's just taking out his anger, after all, even if it's on the wrong person; Harry's got all the evidence lined up in front of him but refuses to believe it. *sigh*

Great chapter, Juls :)

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 09:10 pm · Chapter: I Will Remember You

Woah. So what's happening? What's in Percy's old room, and - why am I eveb asking when I know that I'll probably find out in the next chapter? :P Wow, the funeral was interesting. It's quite odd that Umbridge was there - her duty to the ministry, I guess? *shrug* Interesting. Reading on. ;)

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 08:48 pm · Chapter: It Has Begun

I like the atmosphere you've created at Bella's manor! People don't often write what a Death Eater's gathering would be like, and your portrayal is certainly very interesting :D

I should hate you, shouldn't I? You're making me somewhat like Draco. *groans* :P I'm really enjoying this story, which is different for me as I never really like stories like this (read: AU deaths; MALFOY). Kudos again :)

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 08:26 pm · Chapter: Mosmordre

I have to admit, you've confused me a little. I think I know what's happened... but... um... well, I won't say anything yet. Maybe the next chapter will clear it up for me a bit. Still a very interesting, very gripping story so far! Kudos!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 06:54 pm · Chapter: Mischief Managed

Interesting! I especially like the last sentence. It shows part of Snape that is hard to see. Great chapter! I might have to admit... you're starting to pull me in with Dramione... *shudders* If you actually succeed, you will truly prove yourself as incredible. :P Good job so far!

Blaire

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 06:29 pm · Chapter: Questions

Gahh, I HATE that Ron's dead! And the fight... why did they have to fight? It was their last conversation! *sniffles* You're very good with words - I feel what each person feels in turn. Especially at the end with Snape and Molly - I could feel what both of them were feeling at the same time. I really like this so far!

Blaire

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