Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 06:09 pm · Chapter: Best Laid Plans

This has already grabbed my attention! I admit, I'm not a fan of Dramione, at which I suspect this will be getting, but your writing is very good and I'm interested to see where this is going and how it'll get there. Very good so far! (and post the rest, you've only got 16 chapters up :P)

Blaire

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 28/08/2008 04:55 am · Chapter: Answers

I liked the flashback to the memory, and how everyone was afraid of Hermione. Draco calling her "lioness", that was brilliant. I loved that bit. I also like how Draco keeps purposely mispronouncing her name, lol.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 28/08/2008 01:26 am · Chapter: Expect The Unexpected

I KNEW it ;o).

That said... you're starting to lose me... I couldn't help but giggle at Draco and Hermione. It's just so far fetched to me, and I can't seem to see the two of them together. I'll keep reading, just don't get all gushy on me... Draco might be good, but he's not gushy, lol.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 27/08/2008 10:55 pm · Chapter: Facing Fears

You are evil, you know that. Tempting me with the hope of finding out that the Grangers are in hiding at the Burrow, and then you skip over the whole thing. Some of the passages in this chapter though were really poetic. This one in particular, although there were others: Rudolphus and Shacklebolt sent spells and dodged them in a macabre dance.

See you sucked me in and now I must continue reading... but first dinner must get started.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 27/08/2008 10:04 pm · Chapter: I Will Remember You

The Grangers are in Percy's room!!! This is one of my all time favorite Amy Grant songs (and I'm a HUGE Amy Grant fan), you tied it into the story beautifully, but that really is your forte. You are able to weave songs into your stories effortlessly, even if you don't put the lyrics into the chapter, the essence of the songs is there.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 27/08/2008 09:27 pm · Chapter: It Has Begun

I'm not giving up hope yet... perhaps this is all an elaborate scheme and the Grangers are still alive. A girl can dream can't she? You've managed to make Draco believable, and there are few stories that can have a "good" Draco believable. On to the next chappie.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 27/08/2008 08:55 pm · Chapter: Mosmordre

What exactly are the chances that Snape sent the Grangers into hiding and then caused the green flashes by aiming the curse at nothing in particular? He must keep up appearances, and you've already killed of Ron, how much must Hermione take? I liked the different points of view of this chapter. Off to read the next chapter.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 03:15 pm · Chapter: Mischief Managed

Ok, juls...I admit, you've sucked me in on this one. It's got action, and suspense. I have always felt that Draco, while arrogant, and cold had a bit of a conscience and would ultimately do something to help the side of good...even if it was to serve his own best interest. You've managed to capture that, so I'll even give the thought of a Draco/Hermione union the benefit of the doubt...just so long as you don't get him all sappy ;o)

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 02:46 pm · Chapter: Questions

He's really dead? Oh, Jus, it's not fair. I do like the emotion you've portrayed in this story. I can hear Molly's screams and feel her grief. And Narcissa is dead? Is that discussed in your Snape/Narcissa story? I'll have to read that one to find out. Off to read more.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 02:26 pm · Chapter: Best Laid Plans

You killed Ron? Juls! How could you? Is he still alive? Snape looked at his "seemingly dead body", maybe there's hope. This is the Draco I believe, cold, sneering, and yet, still subltly working against Voldemort. On to the next chapter.

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