Heartless Bugger!
Draco really doesn't have anything to live for does he?
I'm really upset at Hermione, as she could have been the one to save Draco by bringing him with her to the Order, or at least vouched for him.
Well, it didn't happen this way, so I can rest easy about Draco, but this little story really got me all upset, which is the mark of a brilliantly written piece!
Bravo!
I must admit, I'm not particularly a Dramione fan, although I'm opened to reading most things and this story is very well written and has complexity, which sometimes is hard to achieve in one-shots.
I pressume the person she is in love with now is either Ron or Harry. Still I think it's sad that now that Draco has finally seen the "light" he has to lose his girl.
You definitely add credibility to the story by stating that the Malfoys had been murdered by Voldemort of his minions. I do something similar in my novel-length also to justify Draco's change of allegiance in a, hopefully, plausible way. Ok, there must have been a slow transition for him to fall for a Muggle-born but, of course, a one-shot doesn't give you enough scope to do this slowly.
Very good Dramione, albeit sad!
Very nicely written.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm glad you could find something in my story that you could connect and relate to. <3
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