Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: granpa harry (Signed) · Date: 29/01/2013 03:01 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

I know you wrote this a while back, But it was a cute little bit of a story.

Not sure about the tonsil hockey at the end, but that gave it a little flavor, I guess

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 27/08/2008 10:30 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, this is so sweet :D I love the joking about his being ugly and a git :P Those details really help with the characterization of the couple. Although it moves a bit quickly, it doesn't really seem rushed, and it's meant to be short anyway, so it works. I like this! :)

Blaire

Name: Liz (Anonymous) · Date: 20/06/2008 03:32 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

It was very nice, dear. I enjoyed this bit. I have to say i really liked the snappy, lively conversation between Ron and Hermione. It was lovely. And if you really think Ronmione is ewy and wrote this, well then I applaud, for 'tis good stuff. :D

Author's Response: Lol, thanks Liz. I'm glad you liked it :) lol... Lol, yes Ronmione is ewwy- they're too much like brother and sister. xx

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 06/06/2008 07:11 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww.. that was really cute! I love getting to see scenes like that from the future. It was a bit sudden that Hermione told Ron, so I like his reaction at first. It seemed really realistic and I loved their conversation. Cute story!

Author's Response: Thanks Labby. Wow, I can't believe everyone likes this when I hate it so much... *shrugs*, oh well, I"m glad I can lie through my teeth realisticaly, at least. lol.

Author's Response: Thanks Labby. Wow, I can't believe everyone likes this when I hate it so much... *shrugs*, oh well, I"m glad I can lie through my teeth realisticaly, at least. lol.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 26/05/2008 04:16 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, Val...this is just lovely! Short and sweet. How can you not like Ronmione? 'If she has received my brains she will have chosen not to resemble you in the slightest which way.' She teased him and smirked. She was so glad that he was happy.

'Says the bushy haired girl who magically altered her teeth.' he smirked at her. She swatted him playfully on the cheek and crossed her arms.

That was hysterical! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks honey :) I'm glad you liked it, Taryn. :)

Name: serendip (Signed) · Date: 15/05/2008 01:47 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Short and sweet. Ah Val. I can't believe you wrote a Ronmione! I thought you loved Dramione! Even though Ronmione is obviously canon. :P (I'm teasing you)
If it's a ship you hate, you did an amazingly good job. The only little thing I can say is...Ginny had James before Hermione had Rose. But hey, it IS fanfiction after all.
I love the little comments the teased each other with. So cute!
All in All, lovely job. :D

Ali

Author's Response: I do! Hate Ronmione. Detest it with every fibre of my being... oh... right- I'm so bad with canonness... I knew I must have stuffed something up!

Name: andharrywokeup (Signed) · Date: 03/04/2008 11:56 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

I was thrilled when you told me you were writing Ronmione and even more so, when you said you hated writing them! From someone who's just battled through a Harmony, I can totally understand how hard this must have been! But, from reading this I could never have guessed - your words seem to come so easily. This was beautiful! Very well done! :) x x x

Author's Response: Thanks andy! I'm glad you liked it :) Thanks so much. Yeah, it was incredibly hard. Never again, Andy, never again. Not unless Gubby will let me prompt her if I write another one with all of her crazy specifics.... lol! **gubby, if you read this, wink wink ;)**

Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 31/03/2008 06:52 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww... this is cute! I'm glad Ron finally got over his moment of stress and got to enjoy the moment. And I'm glad Hermione was gossipping.. hehe ;)

Author's Response: Thanks JLHufflepuff! I know, I couldn't resist the Hermione gossipping.

Name: juls (Signed) · Date: 30/03/2008 06:23 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my... Val. It's lovely... and a dedication. Thanks dear.

This is perfectly fluffy and fits Andy's challenge wonderfully.

~~juls

Author's Response: Thanks Juls, I'm glad you like it :) Yes, a dedication :DrnrnValrnrnPS- stupid disney characters giving me the creeps <_<

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