Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: BC (Anonymous) · Date: 07/01/2010 12:23 pm · Chapter: I Solemnly Swear That I Was Up To No Good.

Best fanfiction I've ever read. I loved all the original pranks. The suit of armor in particular was quite well done. I've got to agree with GW, your imagery is indeed fantastic. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 04:11 am · Chapter: Severus Snape's Big Adventure

And Remus finds his backbone! That took guts, to say the least. Taking points from your own house is risky in any situation, but to take them from your best friends is even worse. I am so glad that he stopped ignoring his own conscience, though. And Severus is just such a target. Why can he not wash his hair occasionally? You just want to scoop him up and straighten him out so they'll just leave him alone. With a little love, he could be alright, right?

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 04:09 am · Chapter: Peter Pettigrew's Big Adventure

The imagery and descriptions in this are fantastic! I can see the damp tunnels and the attack the cat makes on him. My heart raced with his as the makes escape after escape. I really rooted for him, and it's PETER. Way to go!

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 04:08 am · Chapter: Things Go Down the Toilet

I know I already told you how much I love that you treat Peter like a real Marauder. Whatever became of him later, he was their friend during this time. They never would have hung out with him if he was a two-faced jerk already. I loved that Sirius never has a girlfriend, except Miss October. You know how everyone else writes him. GAG! I love your version.

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 04:06 am · Chapter: Bubotuber Soap and Itching Powder Talc

The quote about doing "what is right or what is easy" kind of applies to Remus in this story. He can either keep his mouth shut and his friends out of trouble, much to the detriment of his own self-image, or he can stand up and risk losing his friends. Tough spot to be in, but that's the story of his life. Well done.

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 04:04 am · Chapter: I Solemnly Swear That I Was Up To No Good.

I know Remus was delighted that he wasn't viewed as the enemy. That can't be good, that they now think they can get away with murder because they're best friends with the prefect. I love the way you write the humor here, and the interaction between fifteen year old boys is priceless.

Author's Response: Yes, they're a little older there than they were in "Remus's Secret" which I think makes them more fun because now they have all new issues that affect their friendship.

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: This site is a place to host Harry Potter Fan Fiction, The Vampire Diaries Fan Fiction, Twilight Fan Fiction, Original Fiction, Original Poetry, Drabbles and RPG (Role Playing Game) Fan Fiction. This is a not for profit site and is in no way connected to or endorsed by J. K. Rowling, Scholastic Books, Bloomsbury Publishing, Hachette Book Group USA, Summit Entertainment or Warner Brothers. All Twilight Characters/places/settings are copyrighted to Stephenie Meyer. The Vampire Diaries Books and characters/places therein are the property of L.J. Smith and HarperCollins. The Vampire Diaries TV Series is copyright to the CW Network and Alloy. The Dresden Files/Codex Alera is copyright Jim Butcher. These stories are licensed under the Creative Commons as derivative, noncommercial fiction. All other works of Fan Fiction are copyright to the original creators and no copyright infringement is intended. The original characters and plots are the property of the author and may not be borrowed or copied without permission. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended. TOS, Submission Rules, etc., are property of site admin. Gluttony has been open since 14/02/08.

Bad Behaviour has blocked access attempts in the last 7 days.