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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 21/11/2008 08:12 am · Chapter: Chapter 3

Ron, the witless wonder, does it again!

BONEHEAD!

The pranks were good but the gift of the map was a bit confusing . . . how did George get it?  I thought it was in Harry's possession.   Oh, well, literary license. 

Again, why are the dementors flying loose around Harry's house????

Curious . . okay, nosey people ( me ) want answers!

Guess I'll get them in up coming chapters, huh?

HE!HE!HE!



Author's Response: Sorry I haven't been around Gluttony much. Thanks for the review! I never really thought of explaining how George got the map, but now that you mention it... I did explain the dementors, though, luckily enough! I think it's in chapter four, right when Leo gets attac--oops! <3, Tigga.


Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 21/11/2008 07:53 am · Chapter: Difficult Surroundings

Dementors?  Why on earth would they hang around Harry's house????  Umbridge isn't still around, causing trouble, is she?

Ron . . . GROW UP!

What am I saying . . this is Ron "socially delinquent / tactfulness challenged" Weasley I'm talking about . . Forget it, he'll NEVER change!

Okay, on to the next chapter!

 



Author's Response: I explained later. Sorry for the suspense/confusion. lol. Yeah, Ron, in my mind, would never really change--except for money. He probably would be swayed by a large clump of galleons if it came his way. <3, Tigga.


Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 21/11/2008 07:29 am · Chapter: The King Lion

I haven't read much concerning the 'new kids'. and this was a delightful way to start.  Even with your OC, it was believable and very true to the "Marauder/Trio" way of life.

SO, I think I'll just check out your other stories/chapters.

ONWARD!

HE!HE!HE!



Author's Response: Oh, thank you for making me your first! That's very sweet of you. I wasn't trying to recreate any old-time traditions, but I guess I should try harder at avoiding it or just accept it. lol. I'm posting the other chapters now. Sorry for the delay. <3, Tigga.


Name: Elena (Signed) · Date: 24/04/2008 05:54 am · Chapter: Chapter 3

Awwww :)

I thought the prank was brilliant and very original, made me laugh.

But Leo's gifts were just so sweet. Makes you wanna slap Ron for being such a git!!



Author's Response: Thanks. I was really hoping that the prank would get that response. All the fluff stuff can go out the window as long as people can get a good laugh. :) <3, Tigga.


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