How sad! After all Harry went through, to lose his life later to such a horrible disease is so unfair. You wrote this beautifully, though, and you showed Ginny's life so well through her memories. I especially loved the end, where she says "it's one of the few times that I wished you were here instead of wishing I was there with you. " Very touching.

Author's Response: Thank you. I love that part as well!

Oh! This story was so touching! I thoroughly enjoyed it. The ambiguity of this piece, using all the we's and I's instead of names really made this story unique and romantic, in my opinion. You also succeeded in making Harry and Ginny's life together very normal and therefore, very realistic. I felt like I was reading a piece about my own family instead of some famous wizard. The characters were entirely down-to-earth and therefore, endearing.

I only noticed a few grammar/spelling errors. They are as follows.

“Back then, death and fear hoovered over us.”
This should be, “fear hovered over us.”

“We feared to loose friends…”
This should be, “We feared losing friends…”

“We feared to loose our own life. More than that, we feared of loosing one another.”
This should be, “We feared losing our own lives. But more than that, we feared losing one another.”

“When we could just sit on the grass and enjoy each other company”
This should be, “When we could just sit on the grass and enjoy each other’s company.”

“We could promise endless love. We could fight over small things, because we knew that we could make up afterwards. I would say to you that I loved to make up after a fight. You would say that you loved even more.”
This should be, “We promised each other endless love. We would fight over small things, because we knew that we could make up afterwards. I would say that I loved to make up after a fight. You would say that you loved it even more.”

“And when I told you that you looked deep inside my eyes, smiled and kissed me saying that you loved me.”
This should be, “smiled and kissed me, saying that you loved me.”

“You said this was some sort of tradition among muggles.”
I think this would sound better as, “You said this was some sort of muggle tradition.”

“You took me to our bedroom and me made love.”
This should be, “and we made love.”

“I remember how lovely were the first weeks that we lived together.”
This should be, “I remember how lovely the first few weeks we spent together were.”

“ We would fight about toilet seats, tooth paste, wet towels, dirty dishes, bad food and, of course, our own temper.”
This should be, “and, of course, our own tempers.”

“I still reminisce on those nights we spent in front of the fire together, just enjoying each other company as we read a book or played chess or just talked.”
This should be, “I still reminisce about those nights we spent in front of the fire together, just enjoying each other’s company as we read a book or played chess or just talked.”

“ I remember when we saw the positive result like if it was yesterday.”
This should be, “I remember when we saw the positive result like it was yesterday.”

“I also remember the unique feeling of knowing that a person is growing inside of me,”
This should be, “I also remember the unique feeling of knowing that a person was growing inside me…”

“I laughed every time you said that you wish I was always pregnant.”
This should be, “I laughed every time you said you wished I was always pregnant.”

“And then the diagnoses came from a muggle doctor”
This should be, “And then the diagnosis came from a muggle doctor…”

“I remember how much I cried at my mothers arms…”
This should be, “I remember how much I cried in my mother’s arms…”

“ that you rather live a month enjoying life with me and the kids then live an year going through all the pain…”
This should be, “that you’d rather live a month enjoying life with me and the kids than live a year going through all the pain…”

“we had plenty of family dinners at my parents house…”
This should be, “we had plenty of family dinners at my parents’ house…”

“like if that was our last chance to do it…”
This should be, “like it was our last chance to do it…”

“Then, on a particularly beautiful rainy day in august, when we spent the day inside making a chess competition…”
This should be, “Then, on a particularly beautiful rainy day in August, when we spent the day inside having a chess competition…”

“and had two lovely kids…”
This should be, “and has two lovely kids…”

Thanks for giving me the opportunity to read this piece, Little Bibi and good luck!

Best,
celticbard

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it. I'm really happy about this particular story. Thanks for your kind words!