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Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 04:51 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

This is adorable! I've never, ever thought of such a ship - insane! But it works here; such a sweet little piece. The best part, I think, is how even though there's trouble because their families don't want them together, Luna doesn't really worry because she's in love and that's what matters. Wonderful job!

Blaire

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 03:49 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, I would have never thought of a Blaise/Luna ship, but I actually really like the idea! I would have liked to have seen a bit more, maybe why they loved each other so much, but other than that I really enjoyed this. I love reading different pairings and this created an interesting story. I thought you did really well with Luna's character as well.

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 02/06/2008 02:12 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Well, odd ship or not...this was just lovely, Ali! You paint a lovely picture with your words. I could feel the crisp breeze. I loved this line "...and slowly, to the melody in their hearts they danced." That is just breathtakingly beautiful. I don't know that I believe it of Blaise/Luna, but it's beautiful nonetheless.

Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 13/05/2008 05:02 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

This is definitely an unconventional pairing, like you said. I think that you have Luna and her thought patterns down very well. I like the story of how they fell in love in the park kind of randomly - it fits her style, for sure. The only part I'm skeptical of is Blaise's characterization. I think of him as someone cold and snobbish in the books, so it's kind of hard for me to picture him wanting to be with her. However, I think you do a fairly good job of making this one-shot interesting with it. It would be even better if somehow we got to see more.

Author's Response: Yeah...I thought that too, i.e. why I didn't include him much. :DrnThank you though!

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