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Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 10/09/2008 05:22 am · Chapter: I.
I really liked the insight into Sirius's character here. Yes, he was the good-looking guy that all the girls flirted with. But, you don't have him as the cliche'd lady-killer that most do. He is put off by the girls that swoon, and beyond the grasp of the ones that throw themselves at him. Alice keeps the distance, doesn't seem affected by him, and therefore piques his interest. The descriptions are done very well. Good chapter.


Name: Elena (Signed) · Date: 01/08/2008 07:04 am · Chapter: I.

Awwwwwww

I never ever thought of this ship before, its always Sirius/Lily.

But how sweet, yet sad that regardless of which way we write things...Sirius never gets the girl...Well, not in these kinds of stories.

Again, you show how simply brilliant you are dear, I'll never stop being a fan girl of yours. Another fantastic piece of yours!!!



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