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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 15/08/2008 12:49 am · Chapter: Point of View

HOWLER TO RONALD BILIUS WEASLEY

RONALD WEASLY!!!
HOW DARE YOU NICK THAT TEA SET!!
YOUR FATHER AND I DID NOT RAISE YOU
TO BE SUCH A SNEAKY,UNDERHANDED SCOUNDREL!
IF I HEAR THAT YOU HAVE NOT RETURNED THAT TEA SET WITH IN THE WEEK, I SHALL PERSONALLY COME AND MAKE YOU RETURN IT AND APOLOGIZE TO THE OWNER!
YOUR VERY UPSET MUM!

Dinner, hot dog, here we go!
HE!HE!HE!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 15/08/2008 12:37 am · Chapter: The Start of Something New

The Ministry and by association the Minister are a pack of crooks and thieves! AND the Minister is a PUTZ!
On the OTHER hand, Draco's not a bad kisser, it would seem.
AND Hermione has learned to hold her tongue and not scare him off.
There's hope for these tow, yet!
Yipppee!
HE!HE!HE!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 15/08/2008 12:22 am · Chapter: Could We Start Again, Please?

This is gonna be a fun read!
Ok, here's my ?s, which I'm sure you'll answer in the following chapters:
What happened to Draco's old man? (something horribly painful I hope - I HATE Lucius)
WHere's his Mum?
Where's the "weasel" & why did they get divorced?
Well, the only way to find out is to keep reading, I suppose, so here I go!
ONWARD!
HE!HE!HE!

Name: Elena (Signed) · Date: 27/04/2008 07:50 pm · Chapter: The Start of Something New

The kiss was a bit sudden, but it was supposed to be. I loved this. I mean, I really loved this!

As I said in the shout box at EHPF, I was inspired by this one sentance "Hermione couldn't believe there could possibly be anything missing in a room like this."

I have this vision in my head and its begging to be written, perhaps I'll actually break my writers block and get something intellagible out!!

But as far as this story is concerned, I noticed some little cliches, but they totally work in your favour. They aren't the kind you cringe from, but smile and get a warm, fuzzy feeling from them. Then they are mixed in with some originality, giving those cliches a new light and a new home.

I thought Hermione's memories were very real and her reaction real too. I loved how she woke up, almost in a sea of green satin, and there he is...*sigh*....Draco...Okay, you get to him after the elf, but still there he was!!

Then the laughter and the way he held her...as if it were the most natural thing!! Like I said, the kiss seemed too sudden...but I realised, it was supposed to be. I'd be just as stunned as Hermione was, but only more gushy...hahahah

Over all, this was just super fantastic and now there must be a third. I have to know if they DO see each other, if they kiss again, if there is a real connection, not just one from the past...Too much to want to know!! I love it!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're responding to the storyline! It makes me feel so happy that people are reading and enjoying. I really appreciate you taking the time out to read and leave a review.rnrnThe cliches are an intentional inclusion. I wanted to parody and at the same time honor all the dramione fics I've read in the past. I hoped they wouldn't be too obvious but to a rabid Dramione shipper I guess they're as clear as day lol. rnrnI'm glad you thought the kiss was sudden, it shows you're definitely seeing things from her point of view. Poor Hermione was too dense to understand the signals Draco had been sending her all throughout the fic so he finally stops beating around the bush and swoops in.rnrnThere most definitely will be more and the main conflict will start coming into play. But I won't give away too much, you'll have to read it for yourself. ;)

Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 24/04/2008 07:05 pm · Chapter: Could We Start Again, Please?

I really liked this fic. The changes in Draco are very nice, and they seem realistic at the same time. I like the idea of him having the same long hair as his father and carrying his cane as well. It's weird seeing his lack of sarcasm toward her along with the way that he is actually polite. It shows that he has changed drastically, perhaps by his father's death.

I think it's VERY realistic that the family home and fortune would be kept from him or at least searched. Is Shacklebolt the minister in this fic?

I like the way Draco wants to make things right, and I am interested to see what happens in upcoming chapters....

Name: Elena (Signed) · Date: 24/04/2008 06:10 am · Chapter: Could We Start Again, Please?

I loved this :) I love the way you described Draco *sigh* Makes me remember why I love him so much, and the fact I'm a HUGE Dramione fan...I hope there is a sequel and...a kiss???...LOL

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this! There will definitely be more chapters and yes, maybe even a kiss. <3

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