Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: Jen (Signed) · Date: 06/06/2008 03:29 am · Chapter: I Wasn't As Alone As I Thought

I've just read the first 7 chapters all in a row... I hate reading unfinished storeies, as I get all excited and then have to wait for the next instalment... patience is definitely NOT one of my virtues. :)
Anyway - to the review... Great story so far. I love your characterisations of both Remus and Bellatrix and your descriptions of their friendships. I also love the detail taht you put into the spells and potions. You have a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing major.
Love it... hurry up and post more!

Author's Response: Patience ain't one of mine either :) So happy you liked it! I'll try my best to update as fast as I can, but all my works due at school in the next week and a half since it's end of semester - but after that I'll have time for writing, YAY! Thanks a million for reviewing :)

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 04/06/2008 10:17 pm · Chapter: I Wasn't As Alone As I Thought

Yay, I'm glad Bellatrix is fine with Remus. I like the exchange of them being glad they're not what each other is (a Slytherin and a werewolf). I can definitely see this as a hidden relationship, since Bellatrix isn't really ready to rebel against her family. Love the other Marauders of course and their happenings. Once again great chapter! I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: YAY! glad you liked it! Unfortunately the next chappie may be a few weeks, it coming up to end of semester so tests, maths exam and everthing's due. Hopefully won't be too long though :)

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 31/05/2008 06:24 am · Chapter: He's A Werewolf

I'm loving how quickly these chapters are coming out! I loved Bella's reaction to Remus at first, as it seemed really believable. Her thoughts must be so confused over him, but I love it. I love that she discovered the drawings and had to make a copy. This relationship is so cute.. I can't wait for more as usual!

Author's Response: Yes!! Believable. Believable is by far the hard part of this ship. I love reading your reviews, thankyou so much :)

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 27/05/2008 06:31 am · Chapter: Transforming Alone

Oh no.. is it Bellatrix? Or someone else? I liked this chapter a lot! More tension between Remus and Bellatrix. I really liked the explanation of how Bellatrix knew the Potions ingredients and how she kind of taught Remus to know them as well. I thought it was kind of neat how Remus did the same kind of instincts in his drawing as well. And it was nice that he drew Bellatrix. I'm looking forward to more of this! Great job so far!

Author's Response: You'll find out :) I loved writing the potions part so much, it was fun. Glad you're enjoying it still and thanks for reviewing! Oh, and if you want to read them, the next 2 chappies are already up on hpff.

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 19/05/2008 06:03 am · Chapter: A New Spell

I like the interaction between Snape and Bellatrix here. I love how Bellatrix wanted to see Rodolphus in pain.. so she really doesn't like him at all right now? And then they both get to share a little bit about deep secrets of theres. It was nice to get this from Bellatrix's POV.. great chapter!

Author's Response: Nah she doesn't like him at all. Makes you wonder how they end up married . . . Glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing ;)

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 14/05/2008 08:36 pm · Chapter: Prank Time

Haha.. great chapter! I love how Remus sent a note to Bellatrix to warn her of what was going to happen. I loved the prank as well.. it seems just like something the Marauders would do. And I love how you're starting to characterize Remus. I love his character and you're doing a great job with it. I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response:
Yay! I've been working really hard on Remus, he's been a bit difficult to get a handle on so it's good to know I'm doing alright. I'm just about to post the next chapter now so you won't have to wait long (I keep forgetting the queue's short here, I'm used to the HPFF one) Thanks for reviewing, hope you enjoy the next chapter :)

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 14/05/2008 08:30 pm · Chapter: I Kissed A Blood Traitor

Another great chapter! I really like reading this from Bellatrix's point of view. I don't think I've read too many stories from her POV, and it really is nice to dig into her mind. I like how she showed about her running off with Andromeda and Sirius, while Narcissa and Regulus usually were the friends. That's an interesting detail and I like how they kind of split off, though I guess it has changed since Sirius disgraced the family. Haha.. I loved the comment at the beginning of a Malfoy being capable of writing a book! Hehe.. great job with this chapter!

Author's Response: I LOVE digging into her mind, she's a really interesting character to wriite. Her being closer to Andromeda and Sirius is a crucial part of her character development. Happy you liked it and thanks for reviewing.

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 14/05/2008 08:24 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this is quite an interesting pairing and I'm pretty curious about it. I don't know why Bellatrix would be attracted to Remus at all (maybe it's because he has that bit of darkness to him being a werewolf, though of course, she doesn't know that). I wonder what's going to happen between the two of them. Great job with this story so far.. it's really interesting, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing :)

Name: potterverse (Signed) · Date: 28/04/2008 02:08 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

This is an interesting concept. Bellatrix is such a feral person, maybe that's what attracts her to Remus. I just have an ominus feeling that this will all end very badly.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Considering Bellatrix turns into a psychotic murderer you can pretty much guess it won't end all that well, lol. Thanks for reviewing.

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