Name: BKL8008 (Signed) ·
Date: 25/12/2008 06:45 am ·
Chapter: Underneath A Doorway
Oh, no, poor Dean!
I love the idea of the charmed mistletoe! How creative.
And of course, the nargles. well done.
Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) ·
Date: 16/12/2008 04:16 am ·
Chapter: Underneath A Doorway
well, I thought it was cute. and working under a word limit IS hard, so that was a good job.
I think Dean is cute, too. But with one of the Patil twins, maybe, not Luna. You're right, they're just friends.
Name: Eyriana (Signed) ·
Date: 25/08/2008 12:15 pm ·
Chapter: Underneath A Doorway
This is great, Ali! I never really read Dean stories - in fact, I don't think I ever have - but this is a great little characterization of him! And the jufflyfrugs... *dies* Hilarious! Plus, the end is just great. :)
Blaire
Name: Labby (Signed) ·
Date: 05/06/2008 06:36 am ·
Chapter: Underneath A Doorway
This was so cute! I loved the little bits of personality you added for Dean.. haha.. getting Seamus to test his drink, and Seamus being clueless. Too cute. I loved when Luna was added in as well and the eneding worked out perfectly. Great story!
Name: ginwannabe (Signed) ·
Date: 26/05/2008 04:27 am ·
Chapter: Underneath A Doorway
Oh, Ali! This was adorable! You have Luna spot on. I loved the little tidbits you put in about Dean as well, how he was a neat freak, and the bunny hopping around the tree! That's how I learned to tie my shoes, too...and how I taught my oldest. Eeeek...Romilda, yuck, poor Dean...that'll teach him to hang out under the mistletoe, cocky little thing that he is. Just lovely!