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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 30/10/2009 04:19 am · Chapter: Birthday Discoveries

Now THAT was unexpected, the seemingly easy crossing over from the magical to the vampiric world by both inhabitants of those worlds. Jeez, that was a long and complicated sentence . . even for me! HE!HE!HE!

Great characters popping up and I'm looking forward to seeing them during Harry's school years at the Temple.

Only one small hiccup; I will not mention by whom is being cared by sounds slightly awkward . . .perhaps - I will not mention those who are caring for him ??? having by two times in one sentence just doesn't trip off the tongue, does it? ( Sorry, the spelling/grammar/puncutation/canon nazi in me just poked his nose into your story )

ANYWAY, I'm really looking forward to more of your story, as it has LOTS of potential, from several different angles, to say nothing of Harry being able to whoop Vodemort's butt in some new and fun ways, not thought of by JKR . . .ever!

HE!HE!HE!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 30/10/2009 03:50 am · Chapter: Immortal Death

WHOA!

Now that was a really attention grabbing opening to a story! I'm hooked! SO I'm goning to stop typing and go on to the next chapter . . . this is going to be a GREAT au story . . . yiippee!

HE!HE!HE!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 05/06/2008 06:30 am · Chapter: Birthday Discoveries

Hmm.. I'm a bit confused about the vampire Harry or at least how vampires work in your story. So they are able to age, but they still live forever? I'd love a little more explanation with that. I'm interested to know more about what being a Death Dealer involves. Sounds interesting and I'm just not too sure about it. Harry doesn't exactly seem to be a five year old in this, as some of his questions and answers are a bit too advanced. I'm intrigued by this though, and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 05/06/2008 06:19 am · Chapter: Immortal Death

Ah.. interested start. I like the idea of Harry's great great however many grandparents being vampires. Do other relatives know that they're still alive? And now Harry's a vampire as well? Does that mean that he's going to be an infant forever and how did he get infected? This is interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop it.

Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) · Date: 13/05/2008 05:20 pm · Chapter: Immortal Death

This is an interesting idea but a bit confusing in places. How exactly did Harry get infected as a vampire? Through a drop of blood in his scar? If he is a vampire, wouldn't he stop aging and just be a little baby vampire? I'm interested to see how you envision Harry's future as a vampire.

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