Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 06/06/2008 12:59 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

What a lovely tribute to the young man who played Marcus Belby. It is very sad that he had to die, but that he died saving his brother is truly heroic.

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 28/05/2008 11:44 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

This was a touching tribute and I really liked it! I thought you did a good job showing what he died for. It was so sad, especially because it actually happened, but I thought it was a nice tribute. Thank you for writing this!

Name: juls (Signed) · Date: 28/05/2008 03:33 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Powerfully sad, my dear. It's such a tragedy for someone so young to die so senselessly.

I'm truly speechless... sorry this is so short. But allow me to say that it's well-written and moving.

Great job.... looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Name: morgana (Anonymous) · Date: 28/05/2008 06:09 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

As I have said before, this is a beautiful story. I really like the way you describe the after-life and also the fact that he actually forgives his killer, such a Christian sentiment really and that he doesn't want anyone to be sad for him but how he recognises that this is unavoidable.

By the way, I may have another taker yet, but the plot idea has just come to her but it would be so nice to have a whole compilation of stories to send.

Thanks so much for participating with your lovely story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I owe you a lot for showing me this site, and for creating the challenge. : )

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