Name: BKL8008 (Signed) ·
Date: 03/02/2009 12:12 am ·
Chapter: Officer Matthew Queen
Wow.
This one held my attention all the way through.
Excellent job!
Name: BKL8008 (Signed) ·
Date: 02/02/2009 11:58 pm ·
Chapter: Captain James Patterson
That was just excellent!
Not a thing I can find to argue with.
Name: Melila (Signed) ·
Date: 20/10/2008 09:00 pm ·
Chapter: Officer Matthew Queen
Wow it keeps getting creepier and better! Another suspenseful and extremely well-written chapter, I really hope you update soon, I'll be adding this as a favourite!
Mel xxx
Name: Melila (Signed) ·
Date: 20/10/2008 08:31 pm ·
Chapter: Captain James Patterson
Wow, very cool chapter...I wasn't so sure about all the political stuff in the beginning but oh well. Apart from that I thought it was fantastic...you're style is cohesive and wonderful to read...this story has completely sucked me in! The way you described the fall and the aftermath were just a stroke of genius and I'm very excited to move on to the next chapter.
Mel xxx
Name: Jen (Signed) ·
Date: 03/06/2008 06:06 am ·
Chapter: Captain James Patterson
Wow... I really enjoy your writing style, as you manage to completely give me the creeps and have me fully entranced at the same time. Great story, well done.